6/25/2008

Portfolio: Writing III, § 1a

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Student ID: 07168
(last five digits of
your student no.)




Portfolio for Writing III,
Section 1a

(See: Note 1, below)




0.0. Overview

Reviews, Posts, Words, and More

(See: Note 2, below.)




1.0. Essays

(See: Note 3, below[.])



1.1. Showcase
Short
titles
[+ links]
Dates
(yy.mm.dd)

W
C
L
P
M
Self-introduction
08.04.20
(250 words)
Essay-1: Listen about myself2008.04.09
5
2671
1
1
0
Movie review
08.05.04
(300 words)
MR 1-1: Shrek --Green Monster's Love--

2008.0504


4
429
0
1
1
0
University life
08.05.18

My Full University Life

2008.05.18

6

354

5

0

0

0
Another review
08.06.01

4th Essays: "i, ROBOT"

2008.06.01

6

414

0

1

1

0
Language learning
history
08.06.15
5th Essays: My Three Languages 2008.06.15
5
503
0
000

Slideshow

2008.07.06

(five to ten slides)


Beautiful life

2008.07.05
11840
0
26
0


















Totals---
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27

2151

6

3

29

0




Key:



¶: number of paragraphs three or more sentences in length
W: number of words
C: number of comments
L: number of links
P: number of photos or other graphics
M: number of other media embedded

1.2. Best Essay

Selection and Assessment: Which of those essays do you feel is the best that you've written this semester, and why? Please remember that a complete answer is better than a short answer, and give at least two reasons to support your assessment.


  • My best essay is 4th essay: "i, Robot". Because this essay has link and photo , and I could write about this movie's content and my thinking.

2.0. Comments

Showcase
Titles of posts with links
Dates of comments (yy.mm.dd)
Numbers of words in comments
Qualities of comments**
2.1. Your first comment on your instructor's blog*
Primo Travel Slideshow: Hot Off the Press
08.03.39
23

2.2. Your best comment on a classmate's blog*"Self introduction"
08.04.23

35

Writing a good and bad points.
2.3. Best comment by a classmate on your blog*
My Full University Life

08.05.21

46

She wrote her impression and some questions.
2.4. Most comments on:
Titles of posts with link
Dates of posts (yy.mm.dd) Total number of words in comments
Qualities of comments*[*]
2.4.1. Any one of your essays*

My Full University Life

08.05.18
141

Having questuions.
2.4.1.1. When did you respond to those comments?
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08.05.21
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2.4.1.2. How did you respond to those comments?
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89

I responded some questions and returned some questions.
2.4.2. Any of your other posts*

How I study English

08.05.28

149


It was written the detail of question on comment.
2.4.2.1. When did you respond to those comments?
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08.06.09
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2.4.2.2. How did you respond to those comments?---
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37

I responded about my thinking.








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* Current semester comments on essays and other posts
** Please list the most important qualities of comments on each type of blog post. That is, explain what makes them good comments.




2.5. Recent comments display

Does your blog display recent comments from blog visitors in a prominent location, for example in a sidebar, header, or footer widget? Where or why not?



  • There is my recent comments in a sidebar.

2.6. Additional reflections on comments

  • My comments were very short. It was necessary to write a little more.





3.0. Book Reviews

3.1. ShowcaseShort titles
with links
Dates (yy.mm.dd)WordsComments
Example:
Vampire Killer
07.05.16
39
1
1-01

THE FLINKSTONES iN VIVA ROCK VEGAS 

08.04.20

73

0
1-02

 MIGHTY ROBOT 

08.04.26

181

0
1-03

 STUART LITTLE 

08.05.04


181

0
1-04

 STORIES OF ROBOTS 

08.05.05

494

0
1-05
The Railway Children 
08.05.06

529

0
1-06

  HEIDI

08.05.13

296

0
1-07

TITANIC 

08.05.18

168

0
1-08

Nate the great

08.05.18

273

0
1-09

 Big Fat Cat VS. MR. JONES 

08.06.29

257

0
1-10

The Rat Hunt 

08.07.05

219

0
1-11

 Wizard Wagoo

08.07.08

290

0
1-12

STORIES OF HAUNTED HOUSES

08.07.08

412

0








































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TOTALS:

3373

0



Note: Please calculate book review words and comments totals without the example (above).




3.2. Best Book Review

Selection and Assessment: Which of those book reviews do you feel is the best that you've written this semester, and why? Please remember that a complete answer is better than a short answer, and give at least two reasons to support your assessment.



  • My best book review is "Nate the great". Because I could write a simple book review, I could change color of parts I want to emphasize and write about what I think. I could write this book review because I liked this book.





4.0. Blog Layout, Labeling, Linking, & Media





Showcase
Yes
No
4.1. Does your blog have an archive?


4.1.1. Does the archive display the titles of posts?



4.1.2. Is the archive organized by month?

4.1.3. Is the archive at or near the top of the sidebar?



4.2. Does your blog have labels displayed in sidebar?

5.2.1. Do your labels include these required labels (typed accurately):---
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  • "books" (plural) AND "reviews" (plural)


  • "essays" (plural) AND "portfolios" (plural, without "proto-")


  • "quickposts" (plural, with no space between quick and posts)


  • "links" (plural) AND "media" (plural)


  • "movies" (plural) AND "photos" (plural)


4.2.2. Does your sidebar display other labels?

  • How many other labels have you attached to three (3) or more posts?
    • _36__ other labels attached to three or more posts
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  • Which labels, and to how many posts each? Please list those labels instead of www, xxx, yyy..., and list numbers of posts instead of n, m, o... (in parentheses), below.

0Amimals (2)
0books (12)
0English (13)
0Essays (5)
0Events (13)
0Family (6)
0Files (2)
0Friends (23)
0Houses (3)
0Kumamoto (2)
0Lacrosse (22)
0links (2)
0Machines (3)
0movies (7)
0Music (3)
0My life (7)
0New (4)
0Outline (1)
0part-time job (6)
0photos (4)
0portfolios (1)
0quickposts (13)
0Rests (1)
0reviews (13)
0Self-intro (11)
0Shopping (3)
0Sports (8)
0Tests (2)

oTrips (7)
0Typing (12)

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4.3. Links & media---
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4.3.1. Does your blog include pictures or other graphics?

  • Does your blog profile include a picture or graphic representation?


  • How many of your blog posts this semester include pictures or other graphics?
    • _34__ posts including pictures or other graphics
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4.3.2. Does your blog include posts with multiple links?

  • How many of your posts this semester include three (3) or more links?*
    • _0__ posts including three or more links (including this portfolio!)
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4.3.3. Does your blog include other media?

  • How many of your blog posts this semester include other media?
    • _0__ posts including other media
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  • What kind(-s) of media have you included in posts this semester? Please list them here:
    1. ...
    2. ...
    3. ...

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4.4. Overall presentation

What have you done to enhance the overall presentation of your blog? List and explain the three most important content, formatting, layout, or other presentation changes or enhancements that you have made on your blog this semester.



  1. I wrote contents that is easy to read or understand.
  2. I put many photos because I wanted everyone to watch.
  3. I wrote in boldface.




5.0. Additional reflections on your blog writing

  • I wanted to take in much media. So, I had to ask how to take in at an early age.




6.0. Suggestions for your peers and successors

  • I think you should post almost every day. Then you make up yourself blog, please.

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Notes:



  1. This portfolio template derives from the templates for Writing IIIc and Writing IVc portfolios (2007-08).
  2. Please use the same code in section 0.0 that you used to embed your proto-portfolios in the footer of your blog.
  3. The essays section (1.0. Essays, above) derives from Proto-Portfolio 2-02 (2008)
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